Wednesday, November 7, 2012

ARMS 

                 ARMS!!, a new acronym  my proffesor created to help our class understand how to write more efficient. I like this acronym becaouse its easy to remember, wen i look at my arms im gonna think about this ,wen it sinks more into my mind.

A:stands for adding ideas for clarity

R: refers to removing irrelevant ideas

M:represents moving ideas around the text to make sure ideas flow logically.

S:stands for specifying the details of the ideas in the essay. 

 my arms ^^
 examples of ARMS is when your write something like : that was different. What was different and why was it different from the norm?? - A

When your topic is tissues of the human brain, and you bring up STARWARS?? - R

Start from birth, move to childhood to teenage to adult hood to elderly keep in a logicall - M

yo must stay on topic and give details to your idea dont just say "college should wear uniforms" by its self it needs details 




Appreciating our great players

On Oct. 15 2012 Monday night football took place.
Payton manning age 36 recently recovering from a crucial neck injury, one wich no other quarterback or NFL player has ever came back to the league has ever returned from. After 14 seasons with the colts the all American quarterback lead his new team the Denver broncos to face off the San Diego Chargers Once named the best football player in the nfl he and the broncos were being swept last Monday night 24-0 first half , then I thought the great payton was done……chargers led the biggest first half lead in 668 games of Monday night football
BUT I WAS WRONG
He ended up breaking a NFL record and a personal record he roke the 67th game with over 300 yards . he aslo had the biggest comeback hes ever had in his carrer taking the game back and winning 35-24. Of course with help from his defence and other players. The broncos will continue this season 3-3. Know one how many seasons payton has left but lets cherish the ones he has left, there will be others but non like manning.

Sunday, September 30, 2012


      Assumptions of what entertainment is or what is does and effects people have been made and heard throughout my life I’ve just read an essay that broke it down in what she thinks is the three main reasons. This is to have fun, a reflection of culture, and a personal choice. As always, when I read I learn new things every time. Something I knew but never thought of or put it together. That it takes our attention away from our reality or daily routines for a certain time of the day. People just want to have a good time. Like watching a movie or playing video games, plays, watching live athletics. The we spends millions every weekend on movie theatres. The Greeks saw this as an emotional release, to UN used energy and to refresh our spirits. Mrs. laterall then made me think that is America making entertainment give us hidden messages powerful ones about the real way of American life. Who the mommy and daddy, who looks a thief. You’d be surprised who they point at who for what. Media, movies and sources of entertainment shows these kids subliminally who is whop. Who they want us see as the bad guy. The rest of her fun section of the essay is just some bullshit about the very first model. To me a waste of read, I overall liked the whole essay

Monday, September 24, 2012

           BLACK WOMEN AND THERE HAIR

THIS IS A HIGHLY TALKED ABOUT SUBJECT THROUGH MY AFRICAN AMERICAN CULTURE.
                             "SHE GOT GOOD HAIR", "HER HAIR IS NAAAPY",                                                                                                                                                 .                            "SHE DONT HAVE NO HAIR!!", "THATS NOT HER HAIR"

but in the end none of that matters, it the soul within.

india ire changed my whole perspective on the ideal of hair on black females in society

it just got real


Sunday, September 16, 2012

Tupac shakur 


does this make you think?? what does this make you think??

to break down tupacs "changes"

  the reallism in this to me is close up in personal , he puts these visual scenes in your head of war, poverty, "the streets", murder, gangs , and hope, a figure to change the WORLD YOU LIVE IN and is it gonna be you???

all this in a verse, in a line, he shares a story a story of peoples lives in the 'ghetto'
for some to face reality and for some to know the reality of wats goin on

Saturday, September 15, 2012

                                                             JUST A LITTLE KNOWLEDGE!

THINK PLEASE OBSORB AND THINK

get to know what we've done as AFRICAN people