ARMS 

                 ARMS!!, a new acronym  my proffesor created to help our class understand how to write more efficient. I like this acronym becaouse its easy to remember, wen i look at my arms im gonna think about this ,wen it sinks more into my mind.

A:stands for adding ideas for clarity

R: refers to removing irrelevant ideas

M:represents moving ideas around the text to make sure ideas flow logically.

S:stands for specifying the details of the ideas in the essay. 

 my arms ^^

 examples of ARMS is when your write something like : that was different. What was different and why was it different from the norm?? - A

When your topic is tissues of the human brain, and you bring up STARWARS?? - R

Start from birth, move to childhood to teenage to adult hood to elderly keep in a logicall - M

yo must stay on topic and give details to your idea dont just say "college should wear uniforms" by its self it needs details 

Appreciating our great players

On Oct. 15 2012 Monday night football took place.

Payton manning age 36 recently recovering from a crucial neck injury, one wich no other quarterback or NFL player has ever came back to the league has ever returned from. After 14 seasons with the colts the all American quarterback lead his new team the Denver broncos to face off the San Diego Chargers Once named the best football player in the nfl he and the broncos were being swept last Monday night 24-0 first half , then I thought the great payton was done……chargers led the biggest first half lead in 668 games of Monday night football

BUT I WAS WRONG

He ended up breaking a NFL record and a personal record he roke the 67^th game with over 300 yards . he aslo had the biggest comeback hes ever had in his carrer taking the game back and winning 35-24. Of course with help from his defence and other players. The broncos will continue this season 3-3. Know one how many seasons payton has left but lets cherish the ones he has left, there will be others but non like manning.